माखन खाते पकड़े गए कन्हाई
यशोदा पूछ रही कान्हा से,
“लल्ला, मटकी से रोज़ – रोज़ माखन कौन चुराता है”।
लाड लड़ा के बोले कान्हा, डाल के गलबैयां मां के,
” मैं क्या जानूं , मैं हूं नन्हा बालक ,तू मेरी प्यारी माता है”।
मां बोली,” रहने दे कान्हा, हर दिन तेरा ही उलाहना आता है”
बलराम से पूछूंगी मैं, वो जो तेरा भ्राता है।
“ना मैया ना, बलराम तो झूठा है, वो कितना मुझे सताता है”
ये सब सुन के मैया मुस्काई,
माखन की मटकी एक कोने में रखवाई।
यशोदा की ज़रा देर आंख लग आई,
खटर – पटर सुन के मैया दौड़ के आई
माखन खाते पकड़े गए कन्हाई।
कान खींच के बोली मैया,”पकड़ी गई तेरी चतुराई” ।
कान्हा बोले________
” मारो ना मैया, मैं चाराऊंगा गैया,
सखाओं के लिए ले जाता हूं माखन,
मिलते हैं मुझे वो जमना के तीरे, कदम्ब की छैयां।
सखा मेरे भूखे हैं तो क्या पेट ना भरूंगा
तू भी ना रोक मैया, ऐसा तो में करूंगा”
यशोदा अपने लाल पे वारी- वारी जाए,
कान्हा तेरे गुण सदा ही ये जग गाए।
लगातार अपडेट रहने के लिए सावन से फ़ेसबुक, ट्विटर, इन्स्टाग्राम, पिन्टरेस्ट पर जुड़े|
यदि आपको सावन पर किसी भी प्रकार की समस्या आती है तो हमें हमारे फ़ेसबुक पेज पर सूचित करें|
Ritika bansal - August 6, 2020, 2:56 pm
sunder
Vishakha Dhaka - August 11, 2020, 8:55 am
Very nice poem
red hot mirchi - August 11, 2020, 9:07 am
Very nice poem
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:49 am
Welcome dear
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:49 am
Thank you vishakha
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:49 pm
Thanks
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:35 pm
Thank you
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:48 pm
Welcome Ritika ji
Geeta kumari - August 6, 2020, 2:59 pm
Thank you
Satish Pandey - August 6, 2020, 4:33 pm
बहुत खूब
Geeta kumari - August 6, 2020, 4:48 pm
समीक्षा के लिए बहुत सारा धन्यवाद सतीश जी🙏
Suman Kumari - August 6, 2020, 5:36 pm
बहुत ही अच्छी कविता ।
सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति
Geeta kumari - August 6, 2020, 5:40 pm
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका सुमन बहन🙏
red hot mirchi - August 11, 2020, 9:07 am
Very nice poem
Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand' - August 6, 2020, 5:39 pm
अतिसुंदर भाव
Geeta kumari - August 6, 2020, 5:41 pm
आभार सहित बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद 🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:12 pm
सुस्वागतम
Praduman Amit - August 8, 2020, 11:05 am
Very nice poem
Geeta kumari - August 8, 2020, 11:09 am
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका 🙏
Mamta Sharma - August 8, 2020, 11:14 am
वाह, गीता जी बहुत सुंदर रचना
Geeta kumari - August 8, 2020, 11:22 am
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद 🙏
Mamta Sharma - August 10, 2020, 11:01 pm
Welcome
Mamta Sharma - August 8, 2020, 11:14 am
सजीव चित्रण 👏
Geeta kumari - August 8, 2020, 11:23 am
🙏
Subhash Singh - August 8, 2020, 11:17 am
बहुत खूब, सुंदर अभव्यक्ति।
Geeta kumari - August 8, 2020, 11:24 am
आभार सहित धन्यवाद जी🙏
Subhash Singh - August 10, 2020, 11:06 pm
Welcome mam
Subhash Singh - August 8, 2020, 11:20 am
मेरे आराध्य कान्हा जी, जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Geeta kumari - August 8, 2020, 11:24 am
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Siddharth Dhaka - August 9, 2020, 12:51 pm
वाह, सजीव चित्रण
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 2:39 pm
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:29 pm
सुस्वागतम
Siddharth Dhaka - August 9, 2020, 12:55 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 2:39 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Isha Chaudhary - August 9, 2020, 7:04 pm
Very very beautiful!
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 8:40 pm
Thank you isha ji
Isha Chaudhary - August 9, 2020, 7:05 pm
सुन्दर रचना
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 8:41 pm
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आप का
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:30 pm
Welcome isha ji
Aakash Malik - August 9, 2020, 9:54 pm
बहुत सुंदर रचना बाल गोपाल पर। सजीव चित्रण 👏
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 10:34 pm
बहुत सारा धन्यवाद 🙏
Aakash Malik - August 9, 2020, 9:58 pm
चित्र के अनुसार बहुत सुंदर प्रस्तुतीकरण।
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 10:34 pm
आभार सहित धन्यवाद
Anshul Tomar - August 9, 2020, 10:37 pm
Beautifully written poem
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 10:40 pm
Thank you Anshul
prashasti Tomar - August 9, 2020, 10:38 pm
This is absolutely amazing
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 10:41 pm
Thanks allot prashasti
Seema Chaudhary - August 9, 2020, 10:58 pm
बहुत सुंदर काव्य रचना
Geeta kumari - August 9, 2020, 11:03 pm
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका सीमा जी🙏
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 3:58 pm
Thank you seema
SAPNA JAIN - August 10, 2020, 9:06 am
Very nice peom 👌👌👌👍
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 9:13 am
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका सपना जी
Seema Chaudhary - August 10, 2020, 9:59 am
वाह , सजीव चित्रण
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 10:02 am
बहुत सारा धन्यवाद
Vidushi Tomar - August 10, 2020, 10:00 am
Beautifully written poem
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 10:03 am
Thanks allot vidushi
AGAM TOMAR - August 10, 2020, 10:09 am
Well written!
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 10:14 am
Thank you Agam
Vidushi Tomar - August 10, 2020, 10:14 am
बहुत सुन्दर शब्दो मे पिरोकर अभिव्यक्त की गई कविता
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 10:19 am
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:44 pm
सुस्वागतम् विदुषी
Arvind Kumar - August 10, 2020, 11:13 am
वाह बहुत बढ़िया
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 10:30 pm
धन्यवाद सर 🙏
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 3:59 pm
Thank you very much
AGAM TOMAR - August 10, 2020, 11:39 am
बहुत सुदंर
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 10:32 pm
शुक्रिया अगम
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:11 pm
Welcome
SAPNA JAIN - August 10, 2020, 11:45 am
Very nice 👌👌👌
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 10:33 pm
Thank you sapna ji
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:11 pm
Welcome
Vineet Khokhar - August 10, 2020, 11:47 am
Beautifully thought and expressed. Enjoyed reading it.
Subhash Singh - August 10, 2020, 11:12 pm
Thank you Vineet ji
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:21 pm
Thank you Vineet ji
Arvind Kumar - August 10, 2020, 12:51 pm
Absolutely amazing 👏
Subhash Singh - August 10, 2020, 11:13 pm
Thank you 🙏
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 4:00 pm
Thank you Arvind ji
Amit Kishore - August 10, 2020, 4:28 pm
बहुत ही सुंदर रचना ।
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:22 pm
धन्यवाद अमित जी
Vineet Khokhar - August 10, 2020, 8:54 pm
Bahut hi prashansa yogy kavita. Keep it up
Isha Chaudhary - August 10, 2020, 8:58 pm
Agreed
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:24 pm
सुस्वागतम्
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:23 pm
Thank you
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:27 pm
Thank you vineet
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:45 pm
Welcome vineet
Isha Chaudhary - August 10, 2020, 8:57 pm
Beautiful depiction of Yashoda-Kanha’s bond
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:24 pm
बहुत सारा धन्यवाद आपका
Isha Chaudhary - August 10, 2020, 9:03 pm
👌🏻
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:25 pm
Tq
Ruchi Dhaka - August 10, 2020, 9:32 pm
Beautiful lines👏👏
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:26 pm
Thanks dear
Abhishek Tomer - August 10, 2020, 10:22 pm
Amazing use of words. You don’t seem an amateur. Its quite professional. Keep it up.
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:26 pm
Many many thanks Abhishek
Jyotsna Singhal - August 10, 2020, 10:24 pm
I have been following you for long. Your selection of words is quite upto the mark. Beautiful lines.
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:28 pm
Thans Jyotsna
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:39 pm
Welcome dear
Neetu Tomar - August 10, 2020, 10:32 pm
True love, truly depicted
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:29 pm
Thanks dear
Abhishek Tomer - August 10, 2020, 10:38 pm
सखा मेरे भूखे हैं तो क्या पेट ना भरूंगा
तू भी ना रोक मैया, ऐसा तो में करूंगा”
वाह अतभूत अभिव्यक्ती
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:29 pm
आभार सहित धन्यवाद आपका
prashasti Tomar - August 10, 2020, 10:46 pm
Ati sundar!!
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:30 pm
Thanks prashasti
Niharika Singh - August 10, 2020, 11:01 pm
Bhaut sundar rachna…
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:31 pm
Thank you Niharika
Aakash Maan - August 10, 2020, 11:02 pm
Nice
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:32 pm
Thanks n welcome
Shivani Tomar - August 10, 2020, 11:03 pm
Very nice poem mam and very nice bonding of lord krishna and yashoda maiya bolo bal Krishn Gopal ki jai
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:32 pm
इतनी सुंदर समीक्षा के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:37 pm
Welcome dear
ADITYA DHAKA vardhan - August 10, 2020, 11:03 pm
nice poetry
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:33 pm
Thank you Aditya
GOVIND KUMAR - August 10, 2020, 11:14 pm
super poetry
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:33 pm
Thanks Govind ji
GOVIND KUMAR - August 11, 2020, 12:14 pm
you welcome
Bliss kumar - August 10, 2020, 11:20 pm
Very very nice poem i so happy
And i proud of you. 👍👍👍👍
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:34 pm
आपकी प्रेरणादायक समीक्षा के लिए आभार एवं धन्यवाद
Pawan Kumar - August 10, 2020, 11:21 pm
Super poetry
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:36 pm
Thanks allot Pawan
Sanjeev Kumar - August 10, 2020, 11:24 pm
lovely story .jj
Geeta kumari - August 10, 2020, 11:36 pm
आपका बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
Akshara Verma - August 11, 2020, 7:06 am
Very nice poem mam .👌👌👌
I am proud of you 👏👏👏👏👏
Sooooo beautiful😍🙏🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 7:50 am
Welcome Akshara
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 7:51 am
Thanks Allot
saloni gudiya - August 11, 2020, 8:14 am
Osm …Poem taiji ….
Kanha k bhav s purn …
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 8:16 am
Welcome dear
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 8:17 am
Thanks saloni
Sarvista Panwar - August 11, 2020, 8:20 am
Very nice , nice poem i will support you mam
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 9:14 am
Welcome sarvista
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 9:15 am
Thank you
Subhash Singh - August 11, 2020, 9:21 am
यशोदा और कान्हा के संवाद का बहुत सुंदर प्रस्तुतीकरण
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:53 am
समीक्षा के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका
Vishakha Dhaka - August 11, 2020, 9:26 am
Very nice poem
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:53 am
Thank you dear
Rajeev Dhaka - August 11, 2020, 9:44 am
Very nice poem keep it up
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:54 am
Thank you rajeev
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:02 pm
Welcome
Ajay verma - August 11, 2020, 10:50 am
Very very nice poem
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:54 am
Welcome
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:55 am
Thank you very much
Ankit Saini - August 11, 2020, 11:12 am
Very very nice lines 👌👌👌
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:55 am
Welcome Ankit
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:56 am
Thanks for your pricious compliment
Preksha Jain - August 11, 2020, 11:15 am
Nice one
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:57 am
Welcome preksha
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:57 am
Thank you
Sachin Saini - August 11, 2020, 11:19 am
Nice lines …
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:58 am
Welcome Sachin
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:58 am
Thank you
Chauhan # - August 11, 2020, 11:23 am
Lajawaab
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:59 am
Welcome
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 11:59 am
समीक्षा के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका
Deepshikha Bhardwaj - August 11, 2020, 11:35 am
Nice👌👌👌👌👌👌
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:00 pm
Welcome Deepshikha
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:00 pm
आभार सहित धन्यवाद आपका
Ajay verma - August 11, 2020, 11:57 am
जय श्री कृष्ण🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:01 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा जी🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:01 pm
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका
Mahi Choudhary - August 11, 2020, 12:13 pm
Very Very nice poem Mam 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻….
It’s so nice …
🙏🏻
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:42 pm
Welcome Mahi
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:43 pm
Thanks for your pricious compliment
SAPNA JAIN - August 11, 2020, 12:27 pm
Good one 👌👌
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:44 pm
Welcome mam
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:44 pm
Thank you 🙏
Vishakha Dhaka - August 11, 2020, 12:28 pm
beautiful poem
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:45 pm
Welcome 🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:46 pm
Thank you very much
Shafali Singh - August 11, 2020, 12:44 pm
Amazing ❣
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:47 pm
Welcome dear
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:48 pm
Thank you very much
Vikrant dhaka - August 11, 2020, 12:51 pm
Very very nice
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:53 pm
Welcome vikrant
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 12:53 pm
Thank you very much
Tomar Singh - August 11, 2020, 1:02 pm
So nice 👍
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 1:44 pm
Welcome
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 1:45 pm
Thank you very much
Akansha Mudgal - August 11, 2020, 1:35 pm
Awesome 👌
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 1:46 pm
सुस्वागत्।🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 1:47 pm
Thank you very much
Akansha Mudgal - August 11, 2020, 1:35 pm
Awesome poem 👌
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 1:47 pm
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:13 pm
Welcome Akanksha
SS Tomar - August 11, 2020, 1:37 pm
बहुत सुन्दर कविता है
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 1:48 pm
Thank you ji
SS Tomar - August 11, 2020, 1:38 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 1:48 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Shyam - August 11, 2020, 2:08 pm
Most adorable lines…….
ये सब सुन के मैया मुस्काई,
माखन की मटकी एक कोने में रखवाई।
यशोदा की ज़रा देर आंख लग आई,
खटर – पटर सुन के मैया दौड़ के आई
माखन खाते पकड़े गए कन्हाई.
Keep it up👌.
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 2:15 pm
सुस्वागतम्
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 2:16 pm
इतनी सुंदर समीक्षा के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका
Siddharth Sharma - August 11, 2020, 3:02 pm
Very Nice lines…जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृजय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृजय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृजय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृजय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृजय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृजय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृजय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा जय श्री कृष्णा I
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Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:13 pm
सुस्वागतम
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:14 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Subhash Chaudhary - August 11, 2020, 3:07 pm
जन्माष्टमी के लिए शुभ अवसर पर इतनी दूर सुन्दर कविता है के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:15 pm
बहुत बहुत आभार जी
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:38 pm
Welcome ji
Subhash Chaudhary - August 11, 2020, 3:09 pm
जय हो बाल गोपाल की
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:15 pm
जय हो बाल गोपाल की🙏
ANITA SHARMA - August 11, 2020, 3:13 pm
Saja do aj gokul ko shree krishn padhare hai
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:16 pm
वाह, क्या बात है। बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:17 pm
Welcome Anita
Alisha sharma - August 11, 2020, 3:17 pm
Mere girdhar gopal dusro na koi jai shree krishna 💙🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:20 pm
Welcome Alisha
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:21 pm
बहुत सारा धन्यवाद और आभार
ANITA SHARMA - August 11, 2020, 3:20 pm
Radhey krishna radhey krishna radhey krishna hare hare 👍
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:21 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:22 pm
Thank you Anita
Alisha sharma - August 11, 2020, 3:21 pm
Shree Krishna govind hare murari hey nath narayan vasudev 🙏🏻💙💙💙💙💙
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:22 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Alisha sharma - August 11, 2020, 3:22 pm
Gopal muraliya wale nand lal muralia wale 🙏🏻💙🌧
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:23 pm
जय हो बाल गोपाल की 🙏
Alisha sharma - August 11, 2020, 3:23 pm
Govind mero hai gopal mero hai shree bake bihari nand lal mero hai 💙🙏🏻
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:10 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:10 pm
Welcome mam
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:23 pm
सादर धन्यवाद
Alisha sharma - August 11, 2020, 3:25 pm
Narayan narayan 🙏🏻💙
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:09 pm
Welcome ji
NEERAJ JAIN - August 11, 2020, 3:30 pm
Verry nice
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:31 pm
Welcome jain saab
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:31 pm
Thank you 🙏
Ayush Jain - August 11, 2020, 3:30 pm
FANTASTICALLY WRITTEN
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:32 pm
Welcome Ayush
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:32 pm
Thank you very much
NEERAJ JAIN - August 11, 2020, 3:30 pm
Nice
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:33 pm
Thank you
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 3:33 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
ANITA SHARMA - August 11, 2020, 3:54 pm
Radhey govind
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 4:19 pm
राधे राधे जी
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:09 pm
Welcome mam
sukant nain - August 11, 2020, 4:39 pm
Great poem of shree karishna and his mother yashoda
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:07 pm
Welcome ji
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:07 pm
Thank you very much
sukant nain - August 11, 2020, 5:10 pm
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Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:33 pm
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:37 pm
बहुत बहुत आभार
Tanus Nain - August 11, 2020, 5:27 pm
Nice poem. I like it
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:34 pm
Thanks for your pricious compliment
Aakash Malik - August 11, 2020, 5:45 pm
Nice poem
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:51 pm
Welcome Aakash ji
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:51 pm
Thank you very much
Dr.vipin Lata - August 11, 2020, 5:46 pm
Fantastic poem.
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:52 pm
Welcome mam
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:52 pm
TThanks for your pricious compliment
Rama Chauhan - August 11, 2020, 5:51 pm
Very nice
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:54 pm
Welcome dear
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:54 pm
Thank you very much
Rakhi Maan Nain - August 11, 2020, 5:52 pm
Nice poem
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:55 pm
Welcome Rakhi
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:56 pm
Thanks for your pricious compliment
mayank chauhan - August 11, 2020, 5:53 pm
very nice
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:57 pm
Welcome
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 5:57 pm
Thank you very much
Mahesh chauhan - August 11, 2020, 5:59 pm
Very good
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:04 pm
Welcome
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:04 pm
Thank you very much
Isha Chaudhary - August 11, 2020, 6:00 pm
Beautifully written
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:04 pm
Welcome
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:06 pm
Thank you
Isha Chaudhary - August 11, 2020, 6:03 pm
This deserves an applause👏🏻
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:08 pm
Welcome dear
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:08 pm
Thanks for your pricious compliment
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:11 pm
Welcome
Seema Chaudhary - August 11, 2020, 6:14 pm
Nice poem
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 4:02 pm
Thank you
Seema Chaudhary - August 11, 2020, 6:15 pm
कान्हा और यशोदा जी के वार्तालाप का सजीव चित्रण
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 4:02 pm
Thank you seema
Mamta Sharma - August 11, 2020, 6:17 pm
Very nice geeta keep it up
Vijay Kumar Sharma - August 11, 2020, 6:17 pm
Very nice poetry.
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:27 pm
Thank you very much
Mamta Sharma - August 11, 2020, 6:17 pm
जय श्री कृष्णा 🙏
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 4:02 pm
Thank you
Arvind Kumar - August 11, 2020, 6:18 pm
बहुत सुंदर कविता है
Arvind Kumar - August 11, 2020, 6:19 pm
जन्माष्टमी के अवसर पर बहुत सुंदर रचना
Khalida Bano - August 11, 2020, 6:21 pm
Ehsas vo jo kbi na choutai , pyar vo jo kbi na tuty
Maa ka pyar tou rhti duniya tk rhe ga iske jaisi misal tou na khi hai or na khi mile
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:25 pm
Thank you
Geeta kumari - August 11, 2020, 6:28 pm
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आपका 🙏
Khalida Bano - August 11, 2020, 9:30 pm
Ek ehsaas jo kbi na choutai ek pyar jo kbi na tuty maa ka pyar tou rhti duniya tk rhe ga jiski misal kbi na mile or khi na mile
Geeta kumari - August 12, 2020, 8:19 am
इतनी सुंदर समीक्षा के लिए बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया 🙏
Devi Kamla - September 7, 2020, 6:11 pm
Very nice
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 4:01 pm
Thank you Kamla ji
Piyush Joshi - September 24, 2020, 3:44 pm
वाह जी वाह
Geeta kumari - September 24, 2020, 4:01 pm
Thank you very much Piyush ji 🙏