Unexpected love
Living by myself, following up on my daily routine
One fine day i spoke to someone whom I had already known and seen
He was my dream crush once upon a time.
But since he was way too out of my league i had no expectations of mine.
After years of not being in contact I spoke to him regarding work
His voice so mesmerizing, i felt i would have a stroke
After ending the call I dropped a text of thankyou
As I had no expectations that our conversation would continue
I decided to end our chat with a sorry I won’t disturb you
But little did I know that one small text of thankyou
Would get me close to the man who was too good to be true
Hi Rukiyah,
Love to see how you’ve portrayed youthful love via your poem.
I have a few suggestions: instead of writing “out of my league” why don’t you write he was too distant a dream, to give it a more poetic touch.
“As I had no expectations” can be made more poetic by little did I expect.
Incorporate these minute changes. Wonderful work. Keep writing!