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  1. This poem is written by annushka. This poem tells us about a person who has found happiness and solace in themselves. Although, she feels sad and lonely at times but now she has embraced it with peace. In starting she founded solace in moon but now she discovered that moon disappeared several time So now she has found companion in stars. The Stars did not left her instead it was with her always. Her voice was calming and very strong. No one could find her in this place, when she sang the trees would go aways and a calming scnenorio would be created. In a little bit of time,everything was calm. When she was on her death bed, only flowers and trees were still and there. This was her home where she took her last breath.

  2. When there is a storm inside the mind, the body sometimes becomes calm.
    Then, nature gives you that peace, which helps you to overcome your restlessness,
    You become able to recognize yourself and your potential.
    You are able to love yourself.
    This poem of yours touches my heart.
    The last paragraph reaches the heart.
    Whoever feels it will find himself in it, and he will believe as if this poem has been written for him.
     
    The feelings of the person and the phenomena of nature have been combined in a very beautiful way.
    brilliant!!

     

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