A star with a fire
You are born to be higher
Baby, you are here to conquer
Not to destroy but to dominate
The time is down but you are high
Let the universe befall upon you just like the star shines upon the earth
Baby, you are here to conquer
Shining through odds
By making your standards high
You are here for crackers in the fire
Set to shine like a star
Baby, you are born a starЁЯТе
I don’t wanna open my eyes tonight, The stars, are lovelier than ever but Enough of it, it’s just way too bright I am just…
The anxiety and depression, Are all repurcussions, Of a part not so well played, Of decisions delayed, Of trusts misplaced, Of not being able to…
Your name is going to be written down in history. With your sweet, twisted truths. You are the diamond found in the deepest mine, The…
I could not see you when I opened my eyes, As the immense pain made you without senses lie, But my baby cries Made you…
Set my soul on fire I beg of thee, Confined as it is, Beneath wounds, and blood Thorns and mud, A sturdy citadel. All in…
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Your poem has a strong sense of empowerment and a theme of overcoming difficulties. The repeated words throughout the poem, such as “Baby, you are here to conquer” and “Baby, you are born a star,” give the poem a certain and powerful tone.
The poem is made brighter and more passionate by the use of the images of a star and fire. The idea of overcoming obstacles and establishing high standards suggests a commitment to success and leaving a lasting impression. Further emphasising their importance and possible impact is the contrast of the star’s brightness on Earth to the cosmos falling upon the subject.
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What a great way of encouragement through words and the comparison is just on point.