Time
Time, a priceless thing,
Who has no owner,
Who is not a owner.
But still people want it.
We can’t predict it ( time).
When we are in a hurry, it’ll be fast.
When we are not in a hurry, it’ll be slow.
A minute seems to be a year,
When we yearn for something.
A minute seems to be a millisecond,
When we enjoy the moment.
Yet time is important.
If we lose it, we are the loser.
If we use it, we are the winner.
And so use it wisely,
Don’t be a folly…
The topic chosen by the poet is itself a wholesome mystery. The good thing about time is that howsoever it is, good or bad, it eventually passes away. It is always said that time is a great healer. It is beautifully described by the poet that nobody owns it but everybody wants a good time in their life.
The poet used the phrases which absolutely matched the topic and hence proved to be a perfect match for it. There are certain grammatical as well as punctuation errors which the poet should be careful in the later time so that there are no obstacles in the path of the reader and can enjoy a hassle free reading.