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अधूरे ख्वाब

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Ashok Marawar

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14 responses to “अधूरे ख्वाब”

  1. Ajay Nawal Avatar
    Ajay Nawal

    nice poem sirji

    1. Ashok Marawar Avatar
      Ashok Marawar

      Thanks

  2. Mohit Sharma Avatar
    Mohit Sharma

    kya baat he…bahut achi kavita

    1. Ashok Marawar Avatar
      Ashok Marawar

      Thanks

  3. सचिन चौधरी Avatar
    सचिन चौधरी

    बहुत खुब…

    1. Ashok Marawar Avatar
      Ashok Marawar

      Thanks

  4. Panna Avatar
    Panna

    Takraane se pata mil jaaega….ye jabaab the laharon ke…bahut khoob!

    1. Ashok Marawar Avatar
      Ashok Marawar

      Thanks

  5. Payal Avatar
    Payal

    nice and beautiful

  6. anupriya Avatar
    anupriya

    good lines and I must say… Jaandaar!

    1. Ashok Marawar Avatar
      Ashok Marawar

      Thanks

  7. Anjali Gupta Avatar
    Anjali Gupta

    wonderful..so deep…long experience is reflecting from each and every word..Great!

  8. Ashok Marawar Avatar
    Ashok Marawar

    Thanks

  9. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी Avatar
    महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी

    वाह

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