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  1. Your poem has a strong sense of empowerment and a theme of overcoming difficulties. The repeated words throughout the poem, such as “Baby, you are here to conquer” and “Baby, you are born a star,” give the poem a certain and powerful tone.
    The poem is made brighter and more passionate by the use of the images of a star and fire. The idea of overcoming obstacles and establishing high standards suggests a commitment to success and leaving a lasting impression. Further emphasising their importance and possible impact is the contrast of the star’s brightness on Earth to the cosmos falling upon the subject.

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