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इक लौ थी

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Mohit Sharma

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इक लौ थी जो जलती रहती थी
करती थी रोशन अंधेरों को
इक आफ़ताब आया कहीं से
औ निगल गया उसे
छोड गया अंधेरे में दुनिया को

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8 responses to “इक लौ थी”

  1. Ajay Nawal Avatar
    Ajay Nawal

    BAHUT ACHE MOHIT

    1. Mohit Sharma Avatar
      Mohit Sharma

      thanks

  2. Panna Avatar
    Panna

    deep and drastic!

    1. Mohit Sharma Avatar
      Mohit Sharma

      thanks

  3. Sumit Nanda Avatar
    Sumit Nanda

    nice

    1. Mohit Sharma Avatar
      Mohit Sharma

      thanks

  4. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी Avatar
    महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी

    वाह

  5. Satish Pandey

    लाजवाब

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