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मुक्तक

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छप्पन भोग लगा कर बेटा आज नदी के पास बैठा है
पिण्ड बनाकर मेवे का ढोंग देखो रचा कर बैठा है
जो मर गये एक निवाले के लिए घुट-घुट कर चार दिवारी में
क्या क्या ना सुना बुढ़ापे में बाप ने बुढ़ापे की लाचारी में

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8 responses to “मुक्तक”

  1. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
    देवेश साखरे 'देव'

    बहुत सही

  2. Neha Avatar
    Neha

    Very nice

  3. ashmita Avatar
    ashmita

    Nice

  4. Mohit Sharma Avatar
    Mohit Sharma

    बहुत खूब सर

  5. Poonam singh Avatar
    Poonam singh

    Sahi kaha

  6. NIMISHA SINGHAL Avatar
    NIMISHA SINGHAL

    सही बात

  7. nitu kandera

    Nice

  8. राम नरेशपुरवाला

    Wah

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