थोड़े हम अमीर थे
एक दिल के
थोड़े हम गरीब थे
एक दिल के
थोड़ा मुस्कुराते थे
टुकड़ों में
थोड़ा गुनगुना लेते थे
मुखड़ों में
कभी सौदागर थे
हंसी के
कभी रो लेते थे
पीछे मुड़ के
कुछ बदनाम हैं
दर्द मेरे
और कुछ पाक हैं
अत्फ़ मेरे
…बस यही है ……
मेरे चेहरे की दो निशानियाँ
Wow….aprateem!
thankyou 🙂
plz keep sharing your poem…u put thoughts in different way..like to read more from you 🙂
sure brother 🙂
Ekdam jhakas bhai 🙂
thakyou bhai
nice poem 🙂
shukriyaa aapka 🙂
beautiful…
One of my all time favorite.
it reflect s you dear ☺
🙂 🙂
‘kabhi saudagar the hasi ke
Kabhi ro lete the peeche mud ke’
Beautiful lines
thankyou mahima ji
bas yahi hai mere chehre ki do nishaniyan
bahoot Hi lajawaab
Gaagar me sagar bhar diya aapne rohit ji
saral aur ati uttam…chu gyi ye poem
dhnayawaad rajeev bhai..inayat
it bcms my fav..
shukriyaaa aapka
keep posting ,ur word selection is splendid
agar thankuu very much
this poem reflects me,thaks for appriciation
🙂 🙂
Very close to me …each word
Beautiful and touchy poem
Bahut Hi Laajbab
Ekdam jabardast
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