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Hopeless

By Praveen Agrawal Posted on August 28, 2015November 26, 2018 Category :
  • English Poetry

I walked into the endless tunnel,

my vision blurred and mind obscured,

seeping through the everlasting funnel,

turbulating along its walls I whirled.

 

I ventured onto an aimless path,

my limbs limped and feet faultered,

sliding on a narrow swath,

Hanging in the middle, unreturned.

 

A sweet mellow voice I heard,

a ringing sound ar an echo from within,

It called out to a distant herd,

or to the deep desire burnin’.

 

It said, break the walls and crack the pipes,

stray the road and cast aside

the fears and the hopeless vibes,

and climb up on the rising tide.

Let the agony of the past subside,

Be peace upon the inner strife,

Now what I want is what I like,

Is the motto of my life.

Praveen Agrawal
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5 Comments

  1. अंकित तिवारी says:
    August 29, 2015 at 12:03 am

    Last line tells the real story….

    Now what I want is what I like,
    Is the motto of my life.

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  2. Mohit Sharma says:
    August 31, 2015 at 12:47 pm

    Nice 🙂

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  3. राम राम नरेशपुरवाला says:
    September 9, 2019 at 6:07 pm

    Good

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  4. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी says:
    September 30, 2019 at 11:41 pm

    वाह

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  5. Satish Chandra Pandey Satish Chandra Pandey says:
    September 3, 2020 at 3:34 pm

    Very nice

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