Saavan

Nice winter

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Anjali Gupta

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Woods are dark and deep

Like my feelings and Lazy sleep.

Silent breeze blowing around my ear

Making soft noise, a little whisper.

Cloudy fog is on their way

trembling hands hardly finds their way.

I think winter is on their way.

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10 responses to “Nice winter”

  1. Panna Avatar
    Panna

    nice poetry

    1. Anjali Gupta Avatar
      Anjali Gupta

      thanks

  2. Ankur Khandpur Avatar
    Ankur Khandpur

    Ohh yeah!!.. But a little Grammatical error.. I think if you correct them.. this poem will sound much more perfect 🙂

    1. Anjali Gupta Avatar
      Anjali Gupta

      plz tell me about error so that I can improve

    2. Anjali Gupta Avatar
      Anjali Gupta

      thanks you….can u tell me about the error??

  3. Anirudh sethi Avatar
    Anirudh sethi

    nice winter…nice poem

    1. Anjali Gupta Avatar
      Anjali Gupta

      thanks anirudh

  4. anupriya Avatar
    anupriya

    nice poem anjali

    1. Anjali Gupta Avatar
      Anjali Gupta

      thanks anu…

  5. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी Avatar
    महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी

    वाह

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