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आज टूट गये हम

By Rakhi Gupta Posted on July 7, 2020 Category :
  • मुक्तक

आज टूट गये हम
तुम्हारे वादों की तरह
बरस गयी आंखे हमारी
बावरे सावन की तरह

Rakhi Gupta

7 Comments

  1. Sulekha yadav says:
    July 7, 2020 at 10:05 pm

    short & sweet..nice

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  2. Vijay Singh says:
    July 7, 2020 at 10:20 pm

    nice

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  3. Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand' Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand' says:
    July 8, 2020 at 6:56 am

    Nice

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  4. Abhishek Abhishek kumar says:
    July 10, 2020 at 9:28 pm

    👌👌

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  5. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी says:
    July 11, 2020 at 12:03 am

    👌

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  6. Satish Chandra Pandey Satish Chandra Pandey says:
    July 11, 2020 at 8:19 am

    खूब बहुत खूब

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  7. Abhishek Abhishek kumar says:
    July 31, 2020 at 1:54 am

    उपमा अलंकार का प्रयोग

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