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*आधा चांद*

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Geeta kumari

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आज चांद आधा है,
पर उसकी याद पूरी आ रही
सितारे हंस रहे मुझ पर,
मेरा ख्वाब अधूरा रह गया

*****✍️गीता

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8 responses to “*आधा चांद*”

  1. Pragya Shukla

    Oh…
    So said
    Awesome line

    1. Geeta kumari

      Thanks for your precious compliment.❤️

  2. Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand'

    उत्तम

    1. Geeta kumari

      बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई जी🙏

  3. Satish Pandey

    अति उत्तम अभिव्यक्ति, लाजवाब पंक्तियाँ

    1. Geeta kumari

      समीक्षा गत टिप्पणी हेतु आपका हार्दिक धन्यवाद सतीश जी

  4. Anu Singla

    Good

    1. Geeta kumari

      Thank you

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