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  1. a thoughful poem..nice representation of struggle but the last line \’No humanness left in me in this struggle!\’ doesn\’t seems to be appropriate as humanness is not just our own survival but surviving with the other living beings…that is what human beings are,

    I may have not understood your poem properly.so plz pour some light on this part…

    1. Sometimes existence, rather co-existence becomes so difficult, that we start feeling lost, with no direction or purpose. Every human is born to serve his/her purpose. When we fail to realise that due to depression or failure, thats when humanness is kind of lost.

      1. Existence is purpose of all animals. When we say \”Being Human\”, we try to say leave animal attributes and behave with kind feelings. Kindness is something that should not be lost. (Views are personal …no offence 🙂

      2. humans have a lot other traits than just kindness.. n the phrase \”should not\” is too ideal in this world. plus this very poem does not go anywhr near to kindness n stuff. Its more personal..

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