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January 25, 2018 गणतंत्र दिवस 61

वतन पे है नजर जिसकी बुरी उसको मिटा देगें,,,
सबक ऐसा सिखा देगें कि धड से सर उडा देगें।।

जहाँ पानी बहाना है वहां पर खून देगें हम,,,
वतन से प्यार कितना है जहाँ को हम दिखा देगें।।

हजारो साल काटे हैं गुलामों की तरह हमने,,,
नहीं अब और सहना हैं ये दुनिया को बता देगें।।

कसम है उन शहीदों की लुटा दी जान सरहद पे,,,
उसी रस्ते चलेंगे और अपना सर कटा देगें।।

हमारे गाँव का बच्चा नहीं है कम किसी से भी,,,
जहाँ भी पावं रख देगें वहां धरती हिला देगें।।

समन्दर कांप जाएगा ये दरिया सूख जाएगा,,,
कि ऐसी आग भर देगें सभी मुर्दे जगा देगें।।

मेरा हर शब्द अगांरा मेरा हर लफ्ज़ है बिजली,,,
जहाँ दुश्मन दिखा हमको ‘लकी’ उसको जला देगें।।

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61 Comments

  1. Dharmendra Kumar - January 25, 2018, 5:02 pm

    क्या बात लिख डाली है
    बहुत सटीक

  2. Vivek - January 25, 2018, 6:20 pm

    jai hind

  3. Anuj - January 25, 2018, 6:41 pm

    Bahut vadiya likha h..
    Jai hind Jai bharat

  4. Ranjeetsingh - January 25, 2018, 6:42 pm

    Nice ghazal

  5. manoj05deshmukh - January 25, 2018, 6:50 pm

    Wow bahut badhiya sir

  6. Akhtar - January 25, 2018, 6:51 pm

    बहुत उम्दा वाह वाह वाह

  7. Amit - January 25, 2018, 6:51 pm

    Behtreen sir

  8. Deepshikha - January 25, 2018, 6:54 pm

    Bahut badia…keep it up…jai hind

  9. Monu - January 25, 2018, 6:57 pm

    Bahut badiya sir

  10. Dharmendra Kumar - January 25, 2018, 7:15 pm

    बहुत उम्दा

  11. Salim - January 25, 2018, 8:03 pm

    Waaaaaahhh bahut khub

  12. Deepak - January 25, 2018, 8:13 pm

    Bahut sundar?

  13. rana.chitra - January 25, 2018, 8:20 pm

    वीर रस की अच्छी रचना।

  14. Chitra - January 25, 2018, 8:24 pm

    Waaaaaaah bahut shandaar

  15. Raj - January 25, 2018, 8:29 pm

    bahut hi umda Likha lucky bhai aise hi like rahoge to vo din door nhi jab duniya tumahri kalam ki taqat ko pahchan jayegi. Wah bhai Wah Ati sunder

  16. Shashi - January 25, 2018, 8:34 pm

    Very nice

  17. Deepshikha - January 25, 2018, 9:06 pm

    Nice poem

  18. 2034194000153460 - January 25, 2018, 9:32 pm

    बहुत ही बढिया वाहहहहह जय हिंद

  19. Priyanka - January 25, 2018, 10:53 pm

    बहुत अच्छी रचना ?

  20. Yashwant - January 25, 2018, 11:10 pm

    ((हमारे गाँव का बच्चा नहीं है कम किसी से भी,,,
    जहाँ भी पावं रख देगें वहां धरती हिला देगें।।))
    क्या गजब लिखे है सर

  21. Dushyant - January 25, 2018, 11:17 pm

    बेहतरीन लाजवाब

  22. Pradeep - January 25, 2018, 11:46 pm

    वाह देशप्रेम के जज्बे से भरी बेहतरीन रचना।

  23. Sonu - January 25, 2018, 11:46 pm

    Nice ati sunder lucki g.gazal

  24. Sonu - January 25, 2018, 11:47 pm

    Bhut khoob

  25. kumar.abhinav61 - January 26, 2018, 9:31 am

    बढ़िया

  26. Mamta - January 26, 2018, 10:36 am

    Nice poem

  27. 198126947436688 - January 26, 2018, 10:48 am

    वाह वाह बहुत खूब। देश प्रेम ……….

  28. 198126947436688 - January 26, 2018, 10:49 am

    जय हिंद जय भारत। बहुत सुंदर रचना

  29. Suraj - January 26, 2018, 10:50 am

    Nice

  30. Sanjog - January 26, 2018, 10:51 am

    Bhut shi

  31. Amol - January 26, 2018, 11:05 am

    Bhut achchhe lucky bhai

  32. Babita - January 26, 2018, 11:14 am

    Very good ghazal

  33. Sankalp - January 26, 2018, 11:20 am

    Very good ghazal lucky nim esher ji

  34. Shweta - January 26, 2018, 11:24 am

    Beautiful

  35. Manisha Nema - January 26, 2018, 12:04 pm

    वाह जी ..खूब

  36. Gaurav - January 26, 2018, 12:24 pm

    Nice poem

  37. Rakesh - January 26, 2018, 1:33 pm

    Bahut badiya

  38. Yash Pal - January 26, 2018, 1:41 pm

    Umda jnab

  39. Manoj - January 26, 2018, 1:44 pm

    Babut bah treen

  40. Raaj - January 26, 2018, 1:50 pm

    Bahtreeeen h

  41. Anuj - January 26, 2018, 1:56 pm

    Achhi h ji

  42. Lalit - January 26, 2018, 2:00 pm

    Achhi h ji bahtreen

  43. Babita - January 26, 2018, 2:22 pm

    Bahut sundar

  44. Yogesh - January 26, 2018, 2:39 pm

    Very nice and gud job

  45. Viraj - January 26, 2018, 2:49 pm

    Very nice,, Jai hind

  46. Viraj - January 26, 2018, 2:50 pm

    B

    Aao Jhuk K Salam Karein Unko
    Jinke Hisse Me Ye Mukam Aata Hai,
    Khushnaseeb Hota Hai Wo Khoon
    Jo Desh Ke Kaam Aata Hai
    Happy 26 January

  47. Viraj - January 26, 2018, 2:51 pm

    Bahut bahut badya h Ji apki ye kavita ,,

    Jai Hind

  48. Kamal - January 26, 2018, 4:07 pm

    Nice

  49. Anil - January 26, 2018, 4:13 pm

    Best

  50. Vinod - January 26, 2018, 4:17 pm

    जय हिंद

  51. Sukhdev - January 26, 2018, 4:24 pm

    Nice

  52. Krishan - January 26, 2018, 4:27 pm

    Nice

  53. Mohit - January 26, 2018, 4:30 pm

    Badiya ji

  54. Lokeshhimansu - January 26, 2018, 4:32 pm

    Bahtreen

  55. Subh - January 26, 2018, 4:35 pm

    Best poem

  56. Pradeep - January 26, 2018, 4:51 pm

    like it.

  57. Anil - January 26, 2018, 5:12 pm

    GOOD LUCY NIMESH BHAI

  58. Anuj - January 26, 2018, 5:31 pm

    Vadiya likha h aapne

  59. S - January 26, 2018, 6:21 pm

    Great
    Jai hind jai bharat

  60. Sonu - January 26, 2018, 9:26 pm

    Very nice jagdish bhai

  61. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी - September 12, 2019, 7:53 pm

    वाह बहुत सुंदर

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