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तक़दीर

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देवेश साखरे ‘देव’

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सागर किनारे रेत पर फेरी उँगलियाँ,
देखा जो गौर से बन गई तस्वीर तेरी।
ख्वाब से हकीकत में ले आई मुझे,
एक लहर बहा ले गई तक़दीर मेरी।

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12 responses to “तक़दीर”

  1. Poonam singh Avatar
    Poonam singh

    Bahut khub

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      देवेश साखरे 'देव'

      शुक्रिया

  2. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी Avatar
    महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी

    वाह बहुत सुंदर रचना

    1. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
      देवेश साखरे 'देव'

      धन्यवाद

  3. D.K jake gamer

    अच्छा है

    1. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
      देवेश साखरे 'देव'

      धन्यवाद

  4. राम नरेशपुरवाला

    Wah

    1. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
      देवेश साखरे 'देव'

      शुक्रिया

  5. NIMISHA SINGHAL Avatar
    NIMISHA SINGHAL

    Sunder rachna

    1. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
      देवेश साखरे 'देव'

      धन्यवाद

  6. ashmita Avatar
    ashmita

    Nice

    1. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
      देवेश साखरे 'देव'

      Thanks

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