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पहले से ज्यादा

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Ashmita Sinha

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जिन्हें चाहते थे खुद से भी ज्यादा
न निभा सके वो अपना वादा
तन्हा जब छोड़ दिया जमाने ने हमको
हम खुद के करीब हो गए पहले से ज्यादा

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16 responses to “पहले से ज्यादा”

  1. NIMISHA SINGHAL Avatar
    NIMISHA SINGHAL

    Khubsurat Alfaaz

    1. ashmita Avatar
      ashmita

      Thanks

  2. Poonam singh Avatar
    Poonam singh

    Nice one

    1. ashmita Avatar
      ashmita

      Thanks

  3. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
    देवेश साखरे 'देव'

    Wah kya khub kaha

    1. ashmita Avatar
      ashmita

      Thanks

  4. राही अंजाना Avatar
    राही अंजाना

    वाह

    1. ashmita Avatar
      ashmita

      Thanks

  5. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी Avatar
    महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी

    वाह जी वाह

    1. ashmita Avatar
      ashmita

      Thanks

  6. राम नरेशपुरवाला

    Nice

    1. ashmita Avatar
      ashmita

      Thanks

  7. DV Avatar
    DV

    जिंदगी में जो खुद के करीब जितना जल्दी आ जाए उतना ही बेहतर है… सुंदर रचना

    1. ashmita Avatar
      ashmita

      Thanks

  8. Abhishek kumar

    A1

  9. Pratima chaudhary

    वाह वाह

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