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गाँव की एक रात

By राम नरेशपुरवाला Posted on September 30, 2019 Category :
  • लघुकथा

काली आधी रात में,
दुनिया देख रही थी सपने |
आलस का आलम था चहु ओर
रात भी लग रही थी ऊंघने |

तब मैंने छत से देखा,
बतखो के झुण्ड को तलाब में |
ठंडी हवा भी चलने लगी,
रात के आखरी पहर मे |

मछलिया खूब उछाल रही थी,
फड़ फाड़ा रही थी इधर उधर |
सोचा हाथ लगाउ उनको,
पर ना जाने गई किधर |

तभी कुछ शोर सुनाई दिया आसमान में,
बागुले उड़ रहे थे एक पंक्ति में |
जैसे वो सब मस्त है आजादी में,
मैंने भी आजादी महसूस की उन सबकी संगति मे |

राम
राम नरेशपुरवाला

9 Comments

  1. महेश गुप्ता जौनपुरी says:
    September 30, 2019 at 10:23 pm

    वाह बहुत सुंदर रचना

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  2. NIMISHA SINGHAL says:
    October 1, 2019 at 7:55 am

    सुंदर

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  3. देवेश साखरे 'देव' says:
    October 1, 2019 at 1:01 pm

    Bahut khub

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  4. Poonam singh says:
    October 1, 2019 at 3:29 pm

    Nice

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  5. Ishwari Ishwari Ronjhwal says:
    October 1, 2019 at 4:26 pm

    Very gud

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  6. nitu nitu kandera says:
    October 4, 2019 at 11:02 am

    Beautiful poem

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  7. Pragya Pragya says:
    February 29, 2020 at 11:19 pm

    Good

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  8. Satish Chandra Pandey Satish Chandra Pandey says:
    July 31, 2020 at 1:23 pm

    Ati sundar

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  9. Satish Chandra Pandey Satish Chandra Pandey says:
    July 31, 2020 at 1:24 pm

    waah waah

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