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हीरा की तरह

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तु दिखी मुझे हीरा की तरह,
हुआ प्यार मीरा की तरह,
मिले हम सरफिरा की तरह,
बाप तेरा खा गया खीरा की तरह,
मैं पेट में बना पीड़ा की तरह,
उसने निकाल दिया जलजीरा की तरह।

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17 responses to “हीरा की तरह”

  1. Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand'

    सुंदर

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      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

  2. Abhishek kumar

    Good

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      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

  3. Pragya Shukla

    Nice

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      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

      1. Pragya Shukla

        Welcome

  4. Pratishtha Shukla

    Good

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      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

  5. Abhishek kumar

    Good

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      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

  6. देवेश साखरे 'देव' Avatar
    देवेश साखरे 'देव'

    Good

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      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

  7. Pragya Shukla

    Good

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      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

  8. Abhishek kumar

    सुन्दर रचना

    1. Amod Kumar Ray Avatar
      Amod Kumar Ray

      Thanks sir

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