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चाय में डूबे बिस्किट

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चाय में डूबे बिस्किट
सी हो गयी है जिंदगी
कब टूट जाये,
कब घुल जाये
खबर नहीं

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9 responses to “चाय में डूबे बिस्किट”

  1. Pragya Shukla

    🤐

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      Rakhi Gupta

      Thanks for comment

  2. Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand'

    वाह

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      Rakhi Gupta

      Thanks

  3. Ritika bansal Avatar
    Ritika bansal

    nice

  4. Rakhi Gupta Avatar
    Rakhi Gupta

    Thanks

  5. Abhishek kumar

    भावना अच्छी है परंतु उपमा नहीं

  6. Satish Pandey

    बहुत खूब

  7. Abhishek kumar

    जिंदगी की तुलना बिस्किट से की गई है यह एक नवीन प्रयोग है तथा बहुत ही सुंदर प्रयोग है

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