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दम तोड़ती जिंदगी

By Rajiv Mahali Posted on August 16, 2020August 26, 2020 Category :
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अचानक से कर्ण में एक ध्वनि गूंजी ,

देखा तो भीड़ में कोई दम तोड़ रही थी,

पालन हार अपनी जिंदगी की जंग लड़ रही थी,

कटती अंग – प्रत्यंग के साथ काली घटा छा रही थी,

मानों अपनी कातर नजरों से बहुत कुछ कह रही थी,

प्राण खोने का भय न था उसमें जरा भी,

मानों किसी की तिवान उसे कचोट रही थी,

कौन देगा जीवन इस संसार को ?

पखेरू कहाँ  ढूंढेगा अपना बसेरा ?

बटोही ढूंढेगा छाँव कहाँ ?

सुत करेंगे किलोल कहाँ ?

ओह !….. उसकी पीड़ा असहनीय थी ,

सवालों के साथ जिंदगी ने भी दम तोड़ दी,

नेक इरादा मानव स्वार्थ के बली चढ़ गयी ,

अकस्मात घनघोर बादल छा गयी ,

मानों प्रकृति भी मातम माना रही ,

पर मानव इसबार भी मूक दर्शक बनी रही l

     इसबार भी मूक दर्शक बनी रही l l

                              Rajiv Mahali

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Rajiv Mahali

12 Comments

  1. Pragya Pragya says:
    August 16, 2020 at 8:13 pm

    Nice line

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    1. Rajiv Mahali says:
      August 16, 2020 at 8:30 pm

      Thank you

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  2. Praduman Praduman Amit says:
    August 16, 2020 at 8:20 pm

    कविता अच्छी है।

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    1. Rajiv Mahali says:
      August 16, 2020 at 8:30 pm

      Thank you

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  3. Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand' Pt, vinay shastri 'vinaychand' says:
    August 16, 2020 at 8:33 pm

    Good

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    1. Rajiv Mahali says:
      August 17, 2020 at 11:16 am

      Thank you

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  4. Geeta Geeta kumari says:
    August 16, 2020 at 9:18 pm

    ह्रदय स्पर्शी रचना

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    1. Rajiv Mahali says:
      August 17, 2020 at 11:16 am

      Thank you

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  5. Satish Chandra Pandey Satish Chandra Pandey says:
    August 16, 2020 at 11:18 pm

    बहुत खूब

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    1. Rajiv Mahali says:
      August 17, 2020 at 11:16 am

      Thank you

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  6. Anu Anu Singla says:
    August 17, 2020 at 7:46 am

    Very good

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    1. Rajiv Mahali says:
      August 17, 2020 at 11:18 am

      Thank you

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