The stars and the waves.
The stars were strung together,
The waves were trying to not be a bother,
The stars twinkled
And the waves relaxed.
Upon the shore sat a lonely man,
With his feet touching the waves and eyes touching the stars.
On the waves sailed a woman,
Looking at the north Star and wishing to reach home.
The waves stilled, the stars became brighter,
The man watched with bated breath, his woman step down the ladder.
He ran and held her in his embrace,
The stars twinkled brighter, and the waves sang a symphony.
The stars and the waves were a witness,
To many such stories of awaited reunions.
It us a very romantic and soothing poem feels like a hug 🫂. It feels really enchanting to read and moves the inside of the reader. Really amazing and I hope the writes continues to shed her talent through such pieces upon us. Really amazing
This poem evokes the longing of a man for his love and reunion. It highlights the power of love to reunite people even after many disputes. While the nature bears witness to enjoy their joy and longing to give them a special day. The lines that portray the brightness of stars and the action of waves describe the nature’s affection towards mankind and their love. ❤
It highlights the power of love to reunite people even after many disputes,this poem evokes the longing of a man for his love and reunion
A lovely poem that invokes a lot of imagery in the reader’s minds, it speaks about two estranged lovers meeting again and nature bearing witness to this beautiful occurrence. The phrase ‘eyes touching the stars’ implies that the man may be waiting for his lover to return back into his embrace and by the phrase ‘Looking at the north Star and wishing to reach home.’ The woman can be said to be considering her lover to be her home and hopes to be able to navigate her way back using the North star as a guide.
The poem is a beautiful way of conveying their story, however, the piece may be further improved by omitting some repetitive words or substituting synonyms, as an example, in the second line omitting ‘were’ may improve the flow of the sentence while reading and the third and fourth may be placed after a different sentence or appended to the first two to prevent the feel of repetition and improve the overall image imparted by the poem.
Kudos to the poet for the lovely poem! It was an amazing experience to read this poem 💙
Loved the way you compared the waves and the stars which are complete opposites. Your way of defining poetry is so good that I might ask you for tutoring me personally. Remember that I am your biggest fan.
And you are very sweet and cute. Hope to meet you soon