Poem

With ink as our brush, we’ll paint the sky,
Words flowing freely, as birds soar high.
Through verses, emotions will find expression,
In rhythms and rhymes, a poet’s confession.

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  1. The poem is a lovely illustration of the poetry’s influence and the emotive power of words. The act of creating poetry is compared to painting the sky with ink in this metaphor. The poem gains a sense of freedom and lightness from the idea of birds flying aloft.

    The poem emphasizes the value of using poetry to express oneself. The use of rhyme and rhythm pays homage to the conventional style of poetry while simultaneously implying that poetry can be a means of expression or confession.

    Overall, the poem perfectly encapsulates poetry’s function as a form of artistic expression and emotional release. It is a beautiful ode to the craft of poetry and the force of language.The poem is a lovely illustration of the poetry’s influence and the emotive power of words. The act of creating poetry is compared to painting the sky with ink in this metaphor. The poem gains a sense of freedom and lightness from the idea of birds flying aloft.

    The poem emphasises the value of using poetry to express oneself. The use of rhyme and rhythm pays homage to the conventional style of poetry while simultaneously implying that poetry can be a means of expression or confession.

    Overall, the poem perfectly encapsulates poetry’s function as a form of artistic expression and emotional release. It is a beautiful ode to the craft of poetry and the force of language.

  2. You have chosen a very unique topic to compose poetry on i.e. the Poem itself. In a few words, you have expressed the very foundation on which poetry is based on. Your poetry shows that you find solace in expressing your emotions through verses and rhythms. It helps you to carve your feelings and expressions among the sky of your life. Overall its a very thoughtful and holistic poem.

  3. Through a few short lines, the poet has wonderfully explained the definition of a poet. Taking the theme ‘poem’ is truly eye-catching as it is not a theme commonly taken. The rhyme scheme adds to the easy flow of the poem making it enjoyable to read. What truly made me appreciate the poem is how the poet has derived a connection between ‘ink’ and ‘painting the sky’ as well as ‘freely’ and ‘birds in the sky’. Incredible use of imagery Mayank! Would love to read more beautiful poems by you.

  4. The way you expressed the feelings of a poet that resides in his heart while writing the the power of the poet’s pen is a perfect summary of the poem and the poet itself, using the creative idea of poet’s pen as a brush to paint the sky of the readers and share their feelings of love, sadness and faith, it’s the perfect blend of art and the creativity in the form of a poem

  5. I wish others get to feel the same as you made us.

    It’s all about writing your your dream or fate with the work of your art that is basically your talent or passion. You wish to share your thoughts and emotions which every common person understand and live the life the way they want ……………..

    Nothing less expected from day dreamer to bring magic without watching it.

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