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  1. Riddhi, I am extremely impressed by your talent. This is a wonderful poem, very heartwarming. Not just the grammatical intonations here and there, but the overall message as well. Not “I love you”, instead, “I glory you.” Thank you, for recognising and truly showcasing the divinity of this pure bond.
    I loved how “Brother and Sister” turned to “brother and sister” towards the end. From an individual relation, you made it universal.
    The title itself is a striking alliteration.
    I’m sure this tapestry of life that you’ve woven via this poem, brings a lot more poems in the future. I’ll be waiting.

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