A man with pure heart and soul
Was once with a tea stall
Who belongs to Gujarat
Is now in everyone’s heart
Many criticized him for his policy of demonitizatin
But that was for the good of the nation
In every hard situation
He becomes everyone’s inspiration
A huge salute to you
For your dedication and excellence too.
I don’t wanna open my eyes tonight, The stars, are lovelier than ever but Enough of it, it’s just way too bright I am just…
The anxiety and depression, Are all repurcussions, Of a part not so well played, Of decisions delayed, Of trusts misplaced, Of not being able to…
Lain with weight of lace delicate Upon the face of the deep Soft faceless wonder (vieling) what was and is Not for us Some vasts…
I could not see you when I opened my eyes, As the immense pain made you without senses lie, But my baby cries Made you…
The saint has been martyred. Choked by the very hands that used to point fingers at him. His last breath escaping his neck. Kissing his…
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The poem “A Man with Pure Heart and Soul” is a heartfelt tribute to an individual from Gujarat who is admired for his policies and dedication. While it attempts to convey a positive message, the poem falls short in terms of its linguistic depth and emotional impact. The choice of words is basic and lacks the richness that could have elevated the poem’s overall quality.
The poet’s emotional reach remains on the surface, failing to delve into deeper emotions that would resonate with the readers. The theme of the poem, revolving around demonetization and inspiration, could have been explored with more complexity and introspection. By tapping into a deeper level within themselves, the poet could have created a more profound connection with the readers.
Furthermore, the poem relies heavily on simple rhyming, giving it a childlike quality. While rhyming can be effective when used skillfully, it should not be the sole focus of a poem. The absence of intricate metaphors, vivid imagery, or profound insights limits the poem’s artistic and intellectual appeal.
In conclusion, “A Man with Pure Heart and Soul” possesses a sincere intention but lacks the poetic depth and linguistic finesse needed to engage readers at a more profound level. The poet should explore more nuanced expressions and delve into their own emotions to create a poem that resonates on a deeper, more matured level