4 liner#3

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हिन्दी-उर्दू कविता

कर के दरकिनार फासलों को तू बढ़ता जा

तू चढ़ता जा सीढियां वो तमाम

जो हर पल गोल घूम जातीं हैं सताती हैं पर

बताती हैं कि बढ़ना ही जिंदगी है चढ़ना ही जिंदगी है

‪#‎विकास_भान्ती‬

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10 responses to “4 liner#3”

November 14, 2015

Panna

बहत खूब!

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1. November 14, 2015
  
  Vikas Bhanti
  
  पन्ना भाई बड़ा वाला 🙂
  
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November 14, 2015

Kapil Singh

sach kahe…dil ko choo gayi aapki char lines

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1. November 14, 2015
  
  Vikas Bhanti
  
  big tnx
  
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November 14, 2015

Sumit Nanda

chadte chadte pata nahi kis unchai pe le jaaegi jindagi
kya pata choti pe paunch ke bas tanhaai mile

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1. November 14, 2015
  
  Vikas Bhanti
  
  umdaa
  
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November 14, 2015

Priya Khanna

short but with deep meaning…elegant poetry

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1. November 14, 2015
  
  Vikas Bhanti
  
  tnx
  
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September 12, 2019

राम नरेशपुरवाला

Good

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September 30, 2019

राम नरेशपुरवाला

वाह

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