Don’t you hear
Don’t you hear
my heart is crying.
Don’t you see
my silent tears.
emotions and pain,
running through my vein.
Don’t you feel,
feeling I’ve for you.
Don’t you hear
my heart is crying.
Don’t you see
my silent tears.
emotions and pain,
running through my vein.
Don’t you feel,
feeling I’ve for you.
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Please review….fell free to criticize my poem
Who will dare to criticize ur poem ….
U write so well…
but there is always some space for criticism and for improvement…what do u say??
Good One
thanks 🙂
Maybe a future Collaboration of our mixture of poetry can add more wonderful magic!
By the way, i have always liked the straight from heart kind of poetry and you have nailed it, Anjali 🙂 Keep it up! 🙂
thanks aakash
वाह
Nice